Hush... Poem by Hala Hash.

Hush...

Rating: 5.0


maybe it's not love
but it's the deepest ever crush...
is my heart in a rush
to find someone and bad memories away to brush

hush voices hush..
no i deny it it's not even a crush..
his act it's all i like..
but to stay with him, i don' care that much..

hush voices hush
stop tellin me that i miss him so much

hush voices hush
i won't listen to you even you got loud so much

he cares...he never lied
away from the moon his star lies
but it's so bright..
so unique..
it's so wild..
i feel it's close to me..

oh God, , these voices are gettin' SO loud
but no i really do doubt..
they're so smooth but so loud..
'voices: 'you're on a cruch
'me: ' no i'm not
'voices: ' he's living in you
'me: 'i swear he's not

hush voices hush
no i deny it it's not even a crush..
his act it's all i like..
but to stay with him, i don' care that much..
stop tellin me that i miss him so much
i won't listen to you even you got loud so just hush..


By: Hala Hash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

good and well written poem with some hidden questions and answers... liked it very much... flow is poetic and expression is good..10++++++

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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009

fantastic poem, beautiful lines

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James Mclain 22 June 2009

it is hauntingly beautiful it calls to it..iip

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a beautiful poem..i think that voices are right..the most beautiful voice which we hear first time while we are un aware of the cause of that whispering call.....

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