She Thinks... She Says... Poem by Hala Hash.

She Thinks... She Says...

Rating: 5.0


Her pencil can't write down what she has in mind
what passed away and what is still alive


thoughts grabbing her breath
some of what scares her to death


some issues of her life
some stuff she tries always to hide

some calls she tries to make
some shouts she makes trying to be heared


she is stuck in the dark in the middle of everything
she opens her eyes so wide but still she sees nothing


she gives her all to one special thing
if she lost it she can't even think of any one other thing

she made her world full of them
now they are leaving, leaving her nothing

she has alot that she's missing
she has many cute dresses but confusion and fear is what she's dressing

she was miss independent
now she made them decide & they're leaving she knew what she became & how dependent


she's trying to make things up
she's not asking for help, nop

she's on her way back to miss independent
any building road is never closed and hard to end


By: Hala Hash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

she's on her way back to miss independent any building road is never closed and hard to end These; ast lines of your poems are making the theme rich and I agree with you that 'she' means a perfet humankind may never stop the advancement towards success or freedom to enjoy humanity with collective behavior... this poem is done perfectly and the logic is very encouraging and charmful... well done friend..10+++++++++

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Hazem Al Jaber 22 June 2009

confused she is... thinks alot, but nothing can say.. she needs alot, , nothing she got.. amazing and penned so lovely.. keep on.. yours, , hazem al..

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