Hungry Stones - 6 Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Hungry Stones - 6

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(A poetic translation of a story by Rabindranath Tagore, kśhdhārto pāśhāņa, Hungry Stones, for convenience split in 13 parts) . It is set in blank verse with stanzas that rhymed in between.

VI

Newspaper read, Moghalai dinner done,
I put out the lamp awake like the moon,
And stretched into my bed wishing to sleep;
A radiant star twinkled through the window,
The Aravalli hills skirted darkling woods,
Gazing intent, millions of miles ‘way,
Wondering why mortals sleep when I don't,
And the thought amusing me like a child.

I knew not when or how I fell to snore,
Nor how long, but I awoke with cold chills,
Hearing no sound, no intruder to fore,
The steady bright star had set hind the hills,
The moon in stealth had entered through the door,
And nigh ashamed of his act as never before.
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Translations | 06.03.13 |

Tuesday, August 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lust,passion,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2019

A beautiful poetic translation of a story by Rabindranath Tagore is duly presented here by you. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 August 2019

I appreciate a few reader/poets like you following this translation. Thank you so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2019

Poignant presentation sir! I was arrested by the last stanza that expresses very painful solitude! Appreciated this part of your translation as a fascinating extension of you previous parts. I will look forward to reading your forthcoming parts....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 August 2019

That is a great encouragement Dr Swain. I'll be looking forward to your comments.

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