However I'Ve Hurt Poem by Timothy Weiermann

However I'Ve Hurt

Rating: 4.5


However i've hurt you
It has made my days cold
I only wished it to go away
But it's only deepened my days

However i've hurt us
It's was only to heal the cuts
But together we die
And it's only darkened my skies

However i've hurt you
It has made my days cold
However i've hurt us
It was only to heal the cuts
But apart all it's done,
It's only destroyed a bond of trust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victoria Isles 08 August 2008

AWWWWWWWW AWESOME! I'm finally reading you're poems. Yes, I am, I know, I'm a lazy idiot.

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Anjali Sinha 19 August 2008

Hey Tim, very sentimental and has shades of melancholia in it---otherwise great write. cummon now change this show us that u are different. +++++++++10 to you and lovessssssss anju

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Madison Yeater 10 March 2009

you know, yes it does hurt, but i woulnt let the pleasure be the main reason why you feel as if you have to stay in a relationship, yes its great, but you do what you have to do, and no matter how much it hurts, you have to end it in order to heal your wounds, rather than letting them get worse between the both of you.. nice.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 August 2008

no matter how hurt..........the pleasure of it will never runs out of gas.yer know what i'm sayin'? ; ovely piece Tim!

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Ron Flowers 21 August 2008

A very sincere sound to this poem. Ron

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 August 2008

..heart-felt expression.........10

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Clarissa Tobey 19 August 2008

it sounds so sweet your true feelings have been shown

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