How It Started Then Ended... Poem by Kasi Navadomskis

How It Started Then Ended...

Rating: 5.0


HOW IT STARTED…
Our first kiss was a piece of heaven
Yea so what he was high at the time
But still…first day together was amazing
The way he held me, hugged me and then kissed me.
I was in heaven…but that was 3 months ago…
But I remember it like it was yesterday.

HOW IT ENDED…
How did it end…
It was a very sad ending…
It was not ended in person but by phone…
We talked for a while then the words were said
And my heart was shattered
And the tears started falling like rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Jones 29 July 2009

This is a nice one. What a way to tell a love story. Wow. I give it a 10 all the way.

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Howard Johnson 26 March 2008

Discriptive and heart felt, using an 'antonym' format

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