How I Feel Poem by Ambril Hutchinson

How I Feel



You don't know how I feel
you'll never know how the hell this didnt become so real
All this pain I suffered from my life
You broge it back with all your might
Nothing won't ever be right

I thought being truthful will keep you around
But I was wrong cause all you did was stuck me in the ground
I don't care if I'm sad forever
Cause my heart is an unbalance lever

You dont know how I feel
You'll never know how the hell this didn't become so real. I gave you my all
But baby you decided to leave it down the hall
How I feel won't ever be the same

I thought being truthful will keep you around
You left me and pitch darkness
My heart is dead and deceased
Love for me is like hell
So before you hurt me
Think and ring that cracked bell

Monday, September 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this in class. Its about how someone made you feel so special and tell you all this about my love for you is real. But get played and that person is left in tears. Your lies I believed. I miss him very much...but I know he's not coming back to me. So I put it poem form of how I feel at this point.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abekah Emmanuel 09 September 2014

Take heart my fellow young poet, life is a teacher, the more we live, the more learn. In life, good friends we have, good friends we lost, in fact, people are removed in our lives for good reasons. While people come and replace them for better reasons. Everything happens for good. I wish to advise you to reorganise yourself for a bright future.... nice and emotional poem.... well done!

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