Hot Love (Ready To Go) Poem by david stansfield

Hot Love (Ready To Go)

Rating: 4.0


I'm chasing dreams again
And when I've caught them all
I'll keep them shiny bright
In case you call
Is that your voice I hear
In the telephone
Or is it just the fear
Of being alone

Cut down to size again
I'm on my hands and knees
I'm so exciteable
Oh touch me please
O got my fingers burned
Electricity
Naked like a flame
Please cover me

Do I light up your life at all
Do you glow in the dark
What sparks your fire
Tell me, I need to know
Hot love
I'm ready to go

(c) David Stansfield 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

Normally, I would not give this poem a recommendation. That is because if its inconsistency of rhythm and rhyme. But I found it to be creative enough and entertaining enough to warrant a recommendation. GW62

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 07 July 2008

An excellent poem..............I liked it

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