Alone we walked and in pain
As blade or thorn shall twist
Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
Born as angels sing, a light
Once on earth before remains
Peace His Love brings to night
As each new life is more, proclaims
His birth to shine as angels sing
As the universe sang the Birth
Long ago or this night brings
Each babe the hope of earth
As thorn or joy rebounds
His love on earth resounds.
Love and peace become more powerful words in line of poem. Beautiful.
Or loud the silence talked, refrained And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, proclaims His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth These line are wonderful. I liked the poem very much.
And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, Reading your poem brings into my mind wonderful images and lot of peace. thank you. tony
IN BETWEEN PAIN AND JOY we walk ever with broadness of perception. An excellent poem is well penned.10
His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings.. thank u for writing this poem on the Birth of the Lord.. thank u. thank u. tony Each babe the hope of earth ..
Delightful poem to read. I enjoyed it. Loved the rhyme scheme in this poem.10 Nudershada
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a great descriptive write, profound in theme