Luo Zhihai

Gold Star - 23,562 Points (In 1954 December / Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China)

Hometown - Poem by Luo Zhihai

★ Hometown

☆ Poetry and Translation by Luo Zhihai (1954-, China)

Since came in
The flourishing city
I worried about you
Countless times
Dreamt of you
N times

I feel depressed
Indulge day and night
What day can I
Have a joyous gathering with you?
What time can I
Get off my chest with you?

On April 2,2015, Poetry and Translation

◆ Chinese Text

★ 故乡

☆ 罗志海 新诗

梦魂萦绕 你


Topic(s) of this poem: home

Comments about Hometown by Luo Zhihai

  • Gold Star - 60,416 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10:17:00 PM)

    Lou, let me begin by clearly stating without any hesitation or pause, that l envy your gift of multi-linguistics, and although the above work could use a wee bit of refining to be in perfect English grammatical adherence, I like the storyline...and, God, I love the symbolistics of the Chinese scripting! This, IMO, is quality artwork, worthy of framing, all by itself! Good Stuff, Lou, indeed! ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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