Hold Tight Poem by Greg Allum

Hold Tight



My quiet
weakened voice calls out.
Screams
in the darkness
I listen for an echo
but only silence remains
I awake, covered
in sweat, feeling your body next to mine
I pat the sheets and
the realisation hits
I am alone. I am so alone
and you are the sound
I long to hear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 13 December 2009

I read this and your lines are interesting. This poem has potential. You have the right idea. Good choices of words. I like the idea of an echo. Debbie

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