History Of My World: 02- The Moment Of Birth Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

History Of My World: 02- The Moment Of Birth

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And then there was a splash,
A soundless splash over
the timeless surface
frozen with the fluid
of nothingness-

The waves of singular desire
emanating out of nowhere,
The pulsating horizon
turned orange,
the womb of eternity
started contracting into
a sphere of promising future,
And a baby of the first Spark
of existence was born.


It was the hour
When there was a moment-
a thin line separating
the shape and forms
from the created,
the events and phenomena
from their happening.
It was the moment,
The cosmic moment of birth
Of temporal time.

History Of My World: 02- The Moment Of Birth
Friday, November 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,cosmology,creation,eternity,imagination,timeless,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 10 November 2017

Well penned about the creation The baby of first spark Of existence was born.. The cosmic moment

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 November 2017

Thanks dear Rini for your lovely remark, so inspiring.

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D Priyanka Singh 10 November 2017

It was the hour When there was a moment- a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, A beautiful imagination about the history of birth of the universe. 10+++ for it.

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 November 2017

It was the hour When there was a moment- a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, A beautiful imagination about the history of birth of the universe. 10+++ for it.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 January 2018

The waves of singular desire emanating out of nowhere, The pulsating horizon turned orange, the womb of eternity started contracting into a sphere of promising future, And a baby of the first Spark of existence was born. Sir beautiful describe nice poem10+++++++

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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

It was the moment, The cosmic moment of birth Of temporal time. The poem gives a pious feeling after reading it, don't know why. Can't just say it is nice. 10+++++++

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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

A beautiful imagination about the history of birth of the universe. 10+++ for it.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

Big bang rediscoverd and redefined in a lucid poetic style.

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Sonali Parida 11 November 2017

When there was a moment- a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, the events and phenomena from their happening. Lovely poem so nicely penned. 10+++

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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

I feel overwhelmed to read this poem, I agree with you dear poet.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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