Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
8 March 2013
[Memo on: World Woman's Day]
Delicate
Membrane
Hymen
Hi men
Rupture
Torture
Make
It
Rot
Raw
Rendezvous
Of
Libido
Why?
=) -
Its
Psychic
Somatic
Aeonian
Bruise
Blast.
==)) -
Vicariously
Suffers
Mother
Mary.
===))) -
Forget
Why
Its
Omni
Mother
((^))
Spot
That
Delivered
All
Flora
Fauna
Universe? !
~~~
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From: Robert Cheruiyot To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 4/19/2013 7: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Hymen ~ Hi Men [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hi honorable poet. I just got a chance to go over your poem. Very good write, message delivered. Couldn't help crying especially when you write, 'the spot that delivered fauna and flora of the universe'. You painted a picture that will never be deleted in the minds of the men of this world. You've put on a Good fight and here I repent on behalf of all men. And Niv, are you on facebook. I would also like to meet you there. What do you think? - - Posted thru kindness of AB London
classic thought of how words been painted to paint a picture of the true realness of the complexities of the world; domestic and gender based abuses and violence against women and children, negligence/ parental incompetence and hopelessness have invaded the face of mother earth. good piece of writing Nivedita.
Word and theme are equally well in highest degree. That Delivered All Flora Fauna Universe? ! are in apogee of highest order. What level poet ascended tagging female part as Universal Deliverer...fantastic concept in coherence with Indian scriptural concept of Genesis [it totally differs with Christian Genesis] Thanks for standing like Gibraltar Rock untiringly against the menace BRAVO please keep it up. Regards 10++ if registers
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Rajendran Muthiah To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 4/25/2013 10: 33: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Dear Nivedita, You are a daring poet. Our people were disciplined before the arrival of the Muslim invaders. The rape and loot of the womenfolk and wealth after a war was introduced in the north of our country by the by the invaders from the Central Asian nations. Our people have inherited that culture from them and still in free India, we see the remnants of that culture.I must have a dictionary beside me while reading your poems because you are the only one using such special diction in poetry. Anyhow, I read your poems at leisure and say my comments frankly. Thanks a lot. ++++ Posted thru kindness of AB London
Reality in a poetical form is excellent, it reaches and touches more people that way! Rapists need to know that what they do is inhumane and will not be tolerated by anyone ever again. Your poem is a step in the right direction, helping others to find the courage to follow your example. Thank you for sharing and bravery! RoseAnn
gudddd.. it would b great if u would read mine as well nd drop some comments
gudddd.. it would b great if u would read mine as well nd drop some comments
Niv, nice to read your poem after a pretty long time.It is a fantastic expression of reality in a crisp form. Let me read once more and add a few lines. But on my first glance ten out of ten.
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Sally Plumb Plumb To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 5/28/2013 6: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Attacks on women seem to be worldwide. It is a very bad situation. - - Posted thru kindness of AB London |
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
From: Robert Cheruiyot To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 4/19/2013 7: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Hymen ~ Hi Men [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hi honorable poet. I just got a chance to go over your poem. Very good write, message delivered. Couldn't help crying especially when you write, 'the spot that delivered fauna and flora of the universe'. You painted a picture that will never be deleted in the minds of the men of this world. You've put on a Good fight and here I repent on behalf of all men. And Niv, are you on facebook. I would also like to meet you there. What do you think? - - Posted thru kindness of AB London