Take this dirty, boring dress off,
Have you gotten bored of this life, so move on,
Be not proud, jaunty will disappear soon,
Then, you wont get back,
Just turning back to the mirror,
Which shows off distraught and wrinkle
Oscar Wilde's The Picture of Dorian Gray is what comes to mind reading this well penned, intense write.. This 1st poem of yours is indeed a very good beginning.. Welcome at PoemHunter, Negin
Very well written, i like the two ending lines the most
bored of this life, Be not proud distraught and wrinkle. so many ideas in such a short poem and verses. liked it very much. thank you. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is very beautiful words in your poem dear Negin. Many thanks for sharing it.