Hey Me Poem by Negin Gorji

Hey Me

Rating: 5.0


Take this dirty, boring dress off,
Have you gotten bored of this life, so move on,
Be not proud, jaunty will disappear soon,
Then, you wont get back,
Just turning back to the mirror,
Which shows off distraught and wrinkle

Monday, December 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: regret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 26 December 2015

There is very beautiful words in your poem dear Negin. Many thanks for sharing it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 December 2015

Oscar Wilde's The Picture of Dorian Gray is what comes to mind reading this well penned, intense write.. This 1st poem of yours is indeed a very good beginning.. Welcome at PoemHunter, Negin

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 December 2015

Very well written, i like the two ending lines the most

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Negin Gorji 25 December 2015

Thank you Ellias, I hope to improve.

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Negin Gorji 25 December 2015

Thank you Elias, I hope to improve.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2015

bored of this life, Be not proud distraught and wrinkle. so many ideas in such a short poem and verses. liked it very much. thank you. tony

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Negin Gorji 23 December 2015

Thank you for niticing my poem.

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