Her Keys Poem by ONElia AVElar

Her Keys

Rating: 3.7


Her white hand in his fair hand,
Well nestling in the warm palm
He caresses the bulging bone,
And tries to roll the scroll button
Where is her touch path?
Her face is a radiant screen.
Her nipples are soft keys…
Oh, yes he loves her so much!
If only he could find her
Shift,
Alt,
Del and
Esc(ape) keys…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 25 April 2008

Online babe! Wonderful CAPS KEY! LoL Rx

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Roger Cornish 25 April 2008

Online babe! Wonderful CAPS KEY! LoL Rx

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Flora Gillingham 25 April 2008

Cunning and captivating poem again, One. Fx

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 26 April 2008

:) FANTASTIC................................

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David Desantis 28 April 2008

hahahah awesome! So creative, I love the use of keys and a female body, never thought of that, but wish I had. Your a great poet, im surprised I just found your stuff. Check out mine if you get a chance

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Res John Burman 15 March 2011

I like that Onelia, very much!

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Original Unknown Girl 12 June 2009

LOL! ! ! this is VERY naughty Onelia! ! ! Laughing at this cheeky post. Well done you: -) xx

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Janice Windle 15 September 2008

I love your ironic take on love, Onelia! I found myself laughing aloud at the last few lines of this poem! After all if the Elizabethans could use the garden as a metaphor for love, why shouldn't the twentieth century poet use the computer keyboard for the same purpose! Men spend more time at computers than in gardens and the mastery of IT is a good parallel for the mastery of the art of making love, for many men! x Jan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

An interesting poem with IT image that is contemporary approach.10 for this.

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Motherly breast: at the sources of sexuality. Our poet describes very well the starting point and a stretch of our pathway.

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