Her Fence Is Too Immense Poem by Ray Lucero

Her Fence Is Too Immense

Rating: 5.0


Pledged have I, with open heart
Undying love, supreme devotion
Your walls are high dear counterpart
These eyes have cried a bitter ocean


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 10 June 2008

What about burrowing underneath? With these passionate words as your tools, I'm sure you'll reach her heart in no time! A superb quatrain. S :)

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