Henna Poem by subodh pandey

Henna

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the stationary hands arranged obliquely
in space, trying to hold the falling breath.
words, through porous fingers
clutching the web rolls down the faded red,
stays momentarily on the the pulsating vein.
she withdraw her hands
from a strange eye
as the evening moon
in all its might, evades
the red lament of sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johnathan Juarez 28 May 2012

this is mystifying u got a seductive omniscient style all your own. keep writing and polishing it

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Farah Ilyas 21 January 2012

great poem....descriptive style, hidden meaning..............u done great job carry on..

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 14 January 2012

Yes keep it up.You are good.

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Alicia Meyers 02 January 2012

Very beautiful poem. Discriptive and breath taking. Very good write. (:

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Sajna Kailas 02 January 2012

wow, breath taking narration. I can see the feeling behind this poem and a A dedicated heart of a poet. nice one. keep it up friend! God Bless you! ! ! ! !

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