Heaven On Earth! Poem by Pallavi Sarkar

Heaven On Earth!

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Once, someday in the morning,
I woke up early by mistake,
Something happened to me,
I went outside in my balcony.

At fist I thought my eyes were still sleeping.
But after seeing clearly or not so clearly.
I realized I was inside clouds.
I was standing on clouds.

Wait! I know its not possible.Then?
Am I sleep walking? ? ?
OK! It was fog all around,
Everywhere cloud, everywhere water dripping.
I feel like I was flying in the sky.

I looked around. All white and all blur.
I lift and kept my hand still for sometime.
I found a little water droplets after.
Everything was looking so godly! ! !
I felt like I am in the heaven.

Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,fog,heaven,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

You woke up early at the morning. Something happened there and you had remembered. Little water droplets amazed mind. This was like heaven and you felt mind very Godly. Such a great feeling wondered you and brilliantly you composed this excellent poem with nice imagery...10

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