Savannah Allison

Rookie (August 21 1990)

Heaven - Poem by Savannah Allison

Heaven, where the streets are made of gold,
Heaven, where you never age or grow old,
Heaven, where lifes secrets unfold,
Heaven, where the secrets are told,

Heaven, where flowers grow wild,
Heaven, once again your a child,
Heaven, the weathers always warm and mild,
Heaven, where wings lay open in piles,

Heaven, where we are free,
Heaven, cant you see?
Heaven, its for you and for me,
Heaven, when we are free.


Comments about Heaven by Savannah Allison

  • Gold Star - 7,094 Points Francis Lynch (8/15/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    Sounds like a song from an old Wizard of Oz cartoon show: The streets are paved with gold, /And no one ever grows old, / In a wonderful land called the World of Oz.
    Not worthy of the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,884 Points Kim Barney (8/14/2015 9:49:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Congrats on Poem of the day. I would suggest you make it even better by fixing a few minor errors so that it looks like this:

    Heaven, where the streets are made of gold,
    Heaven, where you never age or grow old,
    Heaven, where life's secrets unfold,
    Heaven, where the secrets are told,

    Heaven, where flowers grow wild,
    Heaven, once again you're a child,
    Heaven, the weather's always warm and mild,
    Heaven, where wings lie open in piles,

    Heaven, where we are free,
    Heaven, can't you see?
    Heaven, it's for you and for me,
    Heaven, when we are free. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,304 Points Ramesh T A (8/14/2015 3:16:00 AM)

    I wonder at the guess about heaven the poet write here! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,512 Points Rajnish Manga (8/14/2015 1:41:00 AM)

    Wonderful landscape of heaven painted through innocent thoughts and imagery: it's an ideal place to live in the blissful freedom. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,834 Points * Sunprincess * (8/14/2015 12:19:00 AM)

    .........nicely written, congratulations on member poem...thank you for sharing ★ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dark Dreamer (11/22/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    WOW! ! ! you have done it nicely :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lidia Schaffer (11/29/2012 11:51:00 AM)

    this is a very beautiful poem and i absolutly love it. Heaven is s part of freedom and a place to feel better about who you are because Jesus picked YOU to enter his gates of heaven. Love Jesus Love the Lord Lidia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malik Ata (7/11/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    I love this poem because, this is exactly what i think aobut when i think of heaven. Except it doesnt ryhme. Every line in the poem gave a vivid detail of what heaven is going to be like. great job. Keep the poems coming. People need to hear more inspirational poems like this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Monina Furigay (7/6/2011 5:34:00 PM)

    I love it... ^-^ can you read some of my poems and rate and comment them? Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiga Aaron (4/1/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Wonderful absolutely wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Duran (11/13/2007 10:09:00 PM)

    its true this poem is an inspiration and it gives people something to look forward to when they die so they wont be scared because when you die your suposed to be happy because your going to live with the king! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Holifield (9/12/2007 2:33:00 PM)

    I loved the poem because it was true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Puppy Luver (10 yrs.old) (7/16/2007 5:42:00 PM)

    This poem was a beautiful piece of poetry and I can now see what heavan will be like when I die. Fantastic writing! Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LaNka Fateye (2/1/2007 11:14:00 AM)

    true, realistic, future, our home.. where there is love, smiles, no haters, all in one, peace, n all free! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ana x (1/20/2007 2:20:00 PM)

    warm and soft poem
    loved it a lot
    love and care
    iyan
    xxxxxxxxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, December 24, 2010


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