Hearts Tongue Poem by hassan hayati

Hearts Tongue

Rating: 4.4


Today is dark but tomorrow,
Lots of suns and stars
Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow
If and if

Like a drop of thirsty dew,
In the petals of a red rose
Keep me in the arms of you

The scent of love, make it free,
The jasmine scent of your neck
For this blocked puzzle, this is the key

Make a safe cozy nest,
For my fevered heart and body
In your heart, on your velvet chest

Let our hearts talk through the eyes,
While the lips are closed
Hearts are familiar like birds in the skies

Today is dark but tomorrow,
Lots of suns and stars
Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow

Hearts Tongue
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: reconciliation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 12 September 2019

A deeply emotional and love poem. Very nicely crafted with a smooth flow. 'Today is dark but tomorrow, Lots of suns and stars Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow'... is positive thought. Congrats.

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Datso Rong 12 September 2019

Nicely crafted? Are you reading the same thing I am?

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Hassan Hayati 15 September 2019

Dear Anil, I appreciate your comment, it is the most encouraging just as usual.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 September 2019

Thirsty dew! ! Muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hassan Hayati 14 September 2019

Thanks for the comment which is encouraging for me.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 22 December 2020

Beautifully crafted, an optimistic piece. Enjoyed reading.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 September 2020

A beautiful love poem, with an equally beautiful picture of a dew-drenched rose bud. 'Make a safe cozy nest, For my fevered heart and body In your heart, on your velvet chest' - loved these lines.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2020

Today has no light in this heart but this is alive like flowers fragrance as the Unseen spirit in every existence Time is unstoppable power of life Tomorrow will come as today maybe the light will come with the tomorrow where the heart will get the eternity and the eternal spirit always removes the darkness those come to its womb and then the heart can speak the ultimate power of life

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2020

Let our hearts talk through the eyes, While the lips are closed Hearts are familiar like birds in the skies..yes, let the inside heart talk with our every limb as the powerful commander which will be expressed as the true knowing self; beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected again as POD

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Rajnish Manga 12 September 2020

How nicely articulated! ! A sweet song straight from the heart of a lover longing for the blissful company of his sweetheart. Thanks. I quote from the poem as under: Make a safe cozy nest, In your heart, on your velvet chest

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