Heartbeat And Love Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Heartbeat And Love

Rating: 5.0


If I say 'cot cote, cot cote, cot cote, cot cote'
I'm speaking systalticly:
alternately contracting and dilating,
pulsating like a heart.

'Systalting'
comes not with the baggage of 'beating',
but, romanticly,
'systalts'
(to my knowledge, in no poem of young-dying Keats)
is not a shade on 'beats'.

Re 'a shade on', above:
'cot cote',
as romantic as 'baby dove'.

Heartbeat And Love
Friday, May 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,bird,heart love,john keats,medical,name,pet,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

Cot cote- sound sparks systematically and we hear this rightly with care and dignity. Heart beat carries love and you five this feelings to us. An excellent poem is nicely penned.10

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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