Heart Desires Poem by Rini Shibu

Heart Desires

Rating: 5.0


Eyes seek what heart desires
Tiny sparks turn into huge fire
No matter how much it cries
But fights and gives many tries
Until it finds the dream higher

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2018

What heart seeks in beat are desired by eyes. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 26 September 2018

Yes, Heart represents the soul. It makes us percieve all things nearest and dearest to the soul. Nicely put. Precise and beautiful. 10+++

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Lamar Cole 02 September 2018

This is a great poem about heart desires.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 September 2018

Hi Rini, .....gives many tries Until it finds its dream higher.... Beautifully expressed how the heart tries achieving the dreams, how it leads the human beings towards greater goals. Lovely write..100

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Captain Cur 01 September 2018

I loved the finish, Until it finds the dream higher! And so we must strive for that higher ideal. As eyes are stunned by art and beauty, your word art is stunning and beautiful!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 September 2018

Eyes seek what heart desires! A short but highly expressive poem! (10)

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