Down
Down
Down
Through the open creaks
That left your heart so open
That left me falling down
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Falling into love with and open heart is remarkable experience though painful!
Such a painful kind of love that can really leave you feeling sore. patch up the wound and go on. Good write. Many capabilities
It's a start! Looking for more. Read Mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unique! I love the... effect. :) Although I simple row of disappearing periods, they add depth. Check out my poems sometime!