Hazel...! …(@ The Hospital Reception) June,20 Poem by saadat tahir

Hazel...! …(@ The Hospital Reception) June,20

Rating: 5.0


Gothic façade on a rundown hut
Two hazel blinkers set in a nut..!

(Islamabad)
(June 24,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

Marvelous piece.10

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Indira Babbellapati 24 June 2009

must be a corporate hospital!

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Brian Jani 07 July 2014

very interesting lines here.they leave doors of imagination open in the readers mind

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Sandra Martyres 08 July 2009

A super two liner Saadat...10

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Rakesh Bedi 02 July 2009

An impressive two liner!

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 June 2009

hey i dont know, i always like the word Hazel.. hazel eyes, there is a popular song called hazel eyes.. well this a nice write indeed... i don't think i can ever write two liners, ...10++ cheers shan

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Carol Gall 25 June 2009

two lines and its great

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