Haunted Poem by persian khushi

Haunted

Rating: 5.0


Vast open spaces
empty places
haunted souls
erie whispers and moans
rattling bones
screams of horror
living on fear
creecking doors
screeching floors
shutters slamming
howling in the wind
thapped between four walls...

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weird
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone Gone 03 May 2012

im listening to THE XX - STARS, and im reading your poEm at the same time, and its amazing the images i get in my head, mixing your words and sounds together. erie feeling to it, sort of a floating, ghostly ffeel, like free.i dont know how to explain it but wow, i like the feeling. its a great piece, really wel done. another song that goes well with it is from the same album a track called - FANTASY. YOUR WORDS MIXED WITH the melody has a trance effect.AMAZING, well done.

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Dave Walker 30 April 2012

A fantastic poem, love it.

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