Hapless (Tyburn) Poem by David Wood

Hapless (Tyburn)

Rating: 5.0


Building
Plumbing
Drilling
Sawing

Husband is a building, plumbing fan
Wife enforces drilling, sawing ban

Sunday, September 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Tyburn, a six line poem consisting of 2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines at the 5th through 8th syllables.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2015

What about the hammer blows? Beautiful new form of poem.

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M Asim Nehal 13 September 2015

Superb...............10+++++

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Pamela Sinicrope 13 September 2015

It creates a great rhythmic effect...... And yes... Funny!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2015

Brilliant expression. Thanks for sharing.....10

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