Vassilis Comporozos

Half-Closed (Haiku) - Poem by Vassilis Comporozos

Eyelids half closed.
Moon shedding light on shadows.
Stars ajar with dreams.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

On the brink of sleeping: a blessed moment when one's free to be his/her real oneself and talk to oneself and no one else...

Comments about Half-Closed (Haiku) by Vassilis Comporozos

  • Veteran Poet - 1,719 Points Pheko Motaung (6/23/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    Wonderful! Yuh's a master with words! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,100 Points Aparna Chatterjee (6/17/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    Very Nice :) Keep Writing.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vincent Kuo (5/27/2012 6:25:00 PM)

    Very elegant poem, creating a deft picture and experience of the half-asleep state! Excellent! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 19, 2012

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