Haiku Twin (Fall) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Haiku Twin (Fall)

Rating: 5.0


In fall migration
Flying geese quack over head
Blue sky comes alive

Yellow butterflies
Upon white basil flowers
For last nectar drop.

Sunday, October 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fall,season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2022

A fascinating haiku dear madam. Loved it. Top score!

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 July 2019

White geese make the sky alive, Yellow butterflies make the ground scene alive, The picture comes vivid. A lovely Haiku pair.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

Amusing expression. Quack of flying geese is interesting Butterflies upon white basil flowers are attractive. Beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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