Haiku: The Book Of Life Poem by A B Faniki

Haiku: The Book Of Life

Rating: 5.0


The book of life is
Made with stone tablet on it
is Ten commandment

Monday, January 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: book,commandment,haiku,life,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
© A B Faniki all right reserved 01/06/2020. A haikuabout great books on earth.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 06 January 2020

The book of life is the greatest book ever written. Thanks for sharing.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 January 2020

Nice haiku. Meaningful. The third line though united stands apart. Perfect construction 10

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A B Faniki 06 January 2020

Thank you, your comment and Susan's put a smile on my face. Be cause the hit the two thing I want thre hiaku to. Topic and construction of haiku. Thanks a bunch once more for the comment.Cheers

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Susan Williams 06 January 2020

Very good topic to write about! ! ! ! ! The Bible is indeed a book of life- -how to live it, how to love it, how to give life and love to others! !

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A B Faniki 06 January 2020

It is indeed. It has the most complex and yet insightful words that inspire. Thank you for the comment. What do u think about my poem some lesson in life are learn the painful way.

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