Haiku & Senryu Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku & Senryu

Rating: 5.0


boots upon a shelf
after long tiring journey
the warmth in the bed.

tree lay's off baggage
these falling leaves are treasure
manure for the earth.

Saturday, February 11, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life,senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 11 February 2023

Sublime finish: the warmth in the bed. and manure for the earth. Too Good.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 February 2023

just beautiful.......

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2023

Wonderful poems both haiku & senryu - a beautiful combination and meaningful content.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2023

Nothing to compare with the warmth of the bed and the leaves that manure the mother earth.

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Rob Lamberton 14 February 2023

We all need to regenerate!

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Exquisite. The two themes seemingly un-related, converge in the sublime ending. Lovely

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Anjandev Roy 13 February 2023

Brilliant work.......thank u, dear friend.......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 February 2023

I love the second one Asim It had more meaning Bravo! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2023

Always a pleasure to read your poems dear Asim ji

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