Haiku - Relief Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Relief

Rating: 5.0


frozen emotions
sheds tear of a melting heart
to shatter the cold

Thursday, January 12, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 12 January 2023

Excellent Haiku Asim, top marks.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

I can feel the ghush of pain seeping through the eyes. Very well expressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2023

Fantastically worded, Dr. M. Asim Sir! TOP Score and myriads more! Fascinating Haiku

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Pallab Chaudhury 23 January 2023

Beautifully penned one... Thanks for sharing with us.... 5* from me....

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Sandra Feldman 23 January 2023

Splendidly brilliant and glorious! A tear that saves the heart from dying. One of the most beautiful and sensitive, Haikus I have ever read!

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Rob Lamberton 22 January 2023

The resilience and strength of the heart to bring the warmth of love where cold feelings have invaded.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 January 2023

Vibrant with emotion. A brilliant work.

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