Haiku - Rains Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Rains

Rating: 5.0


weather advances
when thick and dark clouds surrounds
frog compete peacock

Saturday, July 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: competition ,nature love,rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 11 July 2020

Excellent haiku, the rainy season is always fascinating

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 July 2020

A well composed haiku. Simply splendid....10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2020

Weather advancement happens as per monsoon. Life is dull of light and mercy. We have to proceed perceiving rain and clouds. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2020

Time on horse running Raining comes to enliven In soil greets solely

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2020

A brilliant three-liner! Wonderful contemplation.....................10/10

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