Haiku: Nature & Life- 17 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Haiku: Nature & Life- 17

Rating: 2.3


1. I’m still
Shadow walks
West-east highway.

2. Insect on the
Yellow pumpkin flower
New life.

3. In the fern forest
Mongooses make love
Beckoning teenage.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 30 August 2008

Dear Ashraful i like these haikus that you wrote 3. I’m alone With your Shadow. Insect on the Yellow pumpkin flower New life. there are a few rules in haiku; never philosophise, let the readers do that with your subtle write to derive that haiku feel never make a plain statement haiku like that holds no water pick a specific incident which is so enlightening and inspiring that you cannot help interpreting it into a haiku autumn from the gnarled trees fluttering birds there are actually a lot of poetry sites on haiku. you just have to google search for them

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