sunbathing for hours- her shadow shifts
that's eternity in two lines... and says a lot too.
'her shadow shifts' fine indeed.........10+
An amazing two lines haiku! 10+
oi, napatik na ang imong balak sa KABISDAK.. congrats..
the towel...yes...shifted... good 'ku'
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9/22/2024 11:22:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
that's eternity in two lines... and says a lot too.