Haiku … Forever Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Haiku … Forever

Rating: 5.0


On the old oak tree,
Where lovers names are written,
Etched forevermore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2022

Another beautiful haiku....just beautiful. Top score and to my favourites.

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Neat! Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed it.

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 December 2022

Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it x

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Nosheen Irfan 01 December 2022

Lovely haiku Jane! That's a really fine attempt! Bravo!

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 December 2022

Thank you so much Nosheen x I'm so greatful for your lovely comment x

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2022

Another winning haiku, Jayne! Love it!

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 December 2022

Thank you so much Richard!

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David Wood 30 November 2022

And so they should be! Top marks.

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Sandra Feldman 30 November 2022

So sweet and memorable! A poetic gem, unforgettable and lovely.

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 December 2022

Many thanks Sandra x So appreciated.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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