Haiku........Body Beautiful Poem by Ken e Hall

a senryu on fitness...great

''Burning desires of body'' good haiku..well written..10++

Well-shaped haiku and it's the real fire in women... trim & slim... but there is no short cut...! ! I like the way poet expressing his opinion! !

indeed.. a bullring red hot three lines indeed! ! ! ! thanks for this one! ! ! 10+++ regards shan

good excercise on haiku slim, Ken...hot...thanks...10

a beautiful hot poem..excellent writing..10++++

nice ill take a note from there about body fitness -10 anjali