Haiku Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


A red - flowered creeper
Exhales fragrance
On the barbed wire!

(Translated by Yasmin Hameed)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 13 November 2008

You say little to say much. Very poignant. A poetic gem. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sallie Howson 16 December 2008

simple, concise and very good

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Eddie Roa 19 January 2009

the juxtaposition of two extremely opposed images makes for a powerful impact on the senses.

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 January 2009

beautifully crafted haiku.......very deep thoughts 10

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

short and superb......................

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

Beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll! ! ! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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An amazing and excellent haiku.10.

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

Short and interesting

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Naidz Ladia 17 June 2009

a vineyard..nice haiku..naizz

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Lillian Thomas 04 June 2009

I love this contrast! great haiku.

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