Haiku Poem by Sathya Narayana

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Full moon or no moon
Sheraton shines; slums below
Always in darkness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

true the difference......

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Splendid 10+++

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

The whole poem is a beautiful visual metaphor related to this absolute absence of light or absolute display of it.I can make an analogy between death and life, excellent 10++

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Muhammad Ali 28 May 2009

beautiful piece of art! 10.. Ali

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Pradyumna Jyotir 30 January 2010

What a fine way of depicting the divide between haves and have nots. For the dazzling sheraton, moon hardly makes any difference and for the nearby slums moon can make no difference....their lives are forever submerged in darkness whether moon or no moon.

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Reshma Ramesh 07 June 2009

yeah....that is true..............well penned

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Indira Babbellapati 02 June 2009

urbanization vis-a-vis urban migration in economy of words!

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 June 2009

very meaningful... painted a clear picture of your thoughts... 10+++ _maia_

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

yeah nice imagery indeed..thanks 10

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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