LIGHTING struck the
ground you walk on,
LIKE a spear, it hits
a vein.IT bleeds, and
bleeds.
INSECTS,
TERMITES,
break the mussle of
love, from the inside,
only the inside.
THE out side is painted
up like a whore, working
the night, still there
is hope, so much hope,
when you take off your
clouths, and wash away
this sin....AMEN
I like the poem, but it just seems like you capitalize the wrong words. Its completely up to you how you write your poetry, but when you capitalize a whole word, you are usually trying to put emphasis on it.The words 'like' or 'the' really dont need emphasis in my opinion. Nice poem anyway, Michael
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
when i read this poem it made me think about what a woman with a loose morality said to me way back in my past she said a quick wash will wipe away my guilt and i thought to myself will she wash her soul as well good write david regards AJS