Gratitude To Friends Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Gratitude To Friends

Rating: 4.6


Like lone moon fighting with darkness
like solitary wind yellowing the trees
I wander whole spring searching your marks.

Like crisp night resting peacefully
Like candle lights burning the agony
I melt within my skin.

Like thunderstorm freezing everything
Like waterfall cutting the edges
I fall for worldly sins

Like rising sun with exuberant energy
Like flower bloom under nature's care
I make fresh beginning

By God's grace
By sheer courage
I owe happiness to my friends..

Sunday, September 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: gratitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

I accept it on behalf of PH friends, Lovely gesture, Asim.

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T Rajan Evol 11 October 2018

Too good Man..By God's grace By sheer courage I owe happiness to my friends..

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Nosheen Irfan 01 October 2018

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...A big 10.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2018

Thanks Much Nosheen. .

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2018

A nice gratitude to the friends, I am proud to be one of your friends.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2018

Thanks much Janab. .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2018

Yes, moon expels the darkness and shows path at deep night giving calmness and knowledge both. Flower blooms under nature's care. A great poem of perception is interestingly penned is outstanding poem. God's grace does miracle. We get happiness by his grace only. Thank you very much for sharing this masterpiece poem here...10

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2018

Thanks much Kumarmaniji. .

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