Gold Eater Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Gold Eater

Rating: 5.0


Luxuriant eyes on a head made of gold.
Your way of life will always be silver fed...
Simple to say when your so easily read.
You look down upon us with a smile of jewels
And you think to yourself I could use some new tools.
Your essence so clear; I can see that you hurt.
You have a face that shines dull
And your shadow just lurks.
Can you buy the feelings that you've driven away?
How about a soul that's any color but grey?
All this you ask until you start looking astray.
So you go home to your diamonds and your mountains of candy.
Maybe some love would be a little more handy.
But what do I know, I have a house made of sand
Life will never go wrong because its not part of your plan.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 10 November 2008

some valuable life lessons you have here...great penning!

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Chuck Petz 04 November 2008

Good similes.Excellent process.

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Kesav Easwaran 31 October 2008

'a house made of sand'... very meaningful phrase, apt in the context of the poem...good write frank and expressive, Drake 10

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*Trusting You* 25 October 2008

this is really good, one of your best, if not your best! I love it! *Purkey Girl*

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Chocolate Bunny 25 October 2008

You were right quite a difference. Still just as good as the others

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