God Is 100% Altruistic! Poem by Liza Sud

God Is 100% Altruistic!

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But a Miracle - is a Science,
as the kabbalist Laitman says.
And the letters are simply numbers.
And with letters God world creates.

Our mind is too low, too stupid
to repeat and to understand.
But a miracle - is like food and
you may buy it by changing mind

from your egoism to all-giving,
to the altruism in your soul.
God is 100% altruistic!
Be like Him - and you'll change the world!

Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 13 February 2016

God is experienced when we drop our experience, we return to the Garden of Eden where he resides and we really aren't award of ourselves all is a beautiful expression of grace

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Daniel Brick 06 February 2016

It's wonderful seeing another poem by you after a dearth of poems in December and January! Welcome back, Voice of Liza! And this poem in just twelve lines gives us hope and direction toward a better world than today. Both the hope and direction depend upon faith: Faith is the engine that powers them, and you identify that faith in the most positive moral terms as altruism. My aunt Rosemary is fond of citing the Golden Rule as the heart of religion and Jesus enshrined it when he told a young seeker the Two Essential Laws are Love God and Love your neighbor. (I'm assuming your emphasis on MIRACLE stems from my recent evocations of the miracle-concept. Am I right?) As I read and re-read your poem (I've devoted time to reflecting on your poem) , I kept thinking of the prophet Elijah. I even played the work by Mendelsohn, ELIJAH. And tonight I re-read the ELIJAH section of 1Kings. I take your poem very seriously, dear friend, and I will respond poetically to it in a few days - and nights.

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Ravinder Soni 05 February 2016

Changing mind and change the world - excellent. Deserves 8/10

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