Gloom Of Age Poem by Asif Baloch
Gloom Of Age
there I saw
the lurking pain,
sadness and anger
in the words
written by past
there I felt
incomplete love
with yearns and hope
for one last
brighter sun
alas! why are you
weeping or wailing, asif
for not being discovered
look what happen to those
who were been found
by each other
to get destroyed?
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ah! my friend, my soul
my secret keeper
loneliness is curse
through years my love
it is grief in the heart
which is never cured, never tend
alone gloom of age makes
dark thy face and
thy life of grace draws
near its end
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This poem which I wrote is in response of the one I read, written by a fellow poet ' Lady Grace ' - ' A silver wedding anniversary ' here on PH
'alas! why are you weeping or wailing, asif for not being discovered' Asif, I am feeling gloomy, successful write! 10+++
it is grief in the heart which is never cured, never tend ........there comes an awful end......beautiful writer and sorrowfyl end... goo d write... i enjoy sharing the poem
a beautiful poem reflect a deep feeling and vision in you..well done..10++++
first, i would say 'thanks' for the response you made i like the flow of deliberation from my lines to your words.. all words written in your poem gives inspiration for me to write makes my day filled with joy it makes my unkind heart smile..grace
a classic poets pandering...throes of disillusionment and despair nicely written cheers
Interesting piece......you have captured your readers with your soft and gloomy mood.............10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 4:22:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It all catches up with us in the end, a big memo.