Gliding Over Time Poem by Sandra Feldman

Gliding Over Time

Rating: 4.6


How does Love start
Does it ever end?
Does it last,
Even beyond,
Life and Time?

Flowers don't cry
So why should I,
I should follow
Their Heroic stance
Now that my Love is gone,
Gone are the days
When happiness stayed
And the mirrors of Life
Were full,
With images of my love
For you,
So intensely and vividly
True!

Now,
That you're gone
All reflections of Life's beauty,
Have ended,
I can no longer be with you,
Hold your hand,
And a sad, foggy breeze,
Envelopes all memories
As waves of melancholy
Arrive from the past
With no future fulfilment,
Intended.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 25 December 2020

Sandra, you've written a melancholic masterpiece!

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Chuy Amante 24 December 2020

The end of love is heart breaking

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 December 2020

Dear friend Sandra, i am so glad to have discovered your poem. I am using the word'discovery' because it has taken me quite a while to figure out the new eco friendly Poem Hunter. Excellent poem though it has a strain of pathos. I repeat what Kostas has mentioned - a meloncholic masterpiece, ideed.

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Sandra Feldman 27 December 2020

Dear Geeta,

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Sandra Feldman 27 December 2020

and artist, I wish you just then very best that life can offer. Forgive error still not managing this new system well, at all. Very warm hugs and thank you so much for being so ultra kind and nice to me, Means a lot!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 June 2021

Revisiting this wonderful and touching love poem. Deeply poignant.

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Smoky Hoss 29 December 2020

Such a deep, and deeply moving piece this is. You, with these very p

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2020

I hope and pray that the great and joyful memories will temper the sadness in the heart of the great Poetess. Beautifully crafted poem very well conveyed. Lovingly penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2020

Liked the second stanza. Very original verses that touch the heart. The ultimate stanza is so poignant that makes one cry.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2020

A heartfelt, deeply touching and poignant write. The opening lines are powerful verses that stir the mind to ponder the depth of love.

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