Give Me Wings Poem by Sue armstrong

Give Me Wings

Rating: 4.3


Two lost souls
Where do we go
Hard to think
Hard to handle
Just a new day
Dont no what to say
Please just make it go away
Someone give me wings
So i can fly fly away
To many words
But nothing to say
A brain like a goldfish
How do i stay
Someone help me
Someone just say
It will all be ok
But please! Please just make it go away....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 09 June 2008

I see a poem wrapped in the arms of a plea. The best to you my friend.....and be well!

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2008

At a loss for words. Where are the poems when they are needed? Not the best effort I'm afraid. Needs a little work and polishing, shall we say. Perhaps, even missing something. So, I gave it a 7. But I'm rather tough on everyone. So, it evens out. GW62

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Sue armstrong

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Perth Australia
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