Girl In Black Poem by Akira Anderson

Girl In Black

Rating: 5.0


she was happy
no family or face
but always sunny
turned sad and lonly
but she was NEVER alone
no trust and depressed
'trust no one' was her motto
always suicidal and hated
but never jumped
A girl in black
just met her DARK prince
he just happened
to be DEATH...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hmmmmm, i like this one.... almost my story... thanks for sharing, +10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

you are truly expressive and that is truly spectacular! u amazing!

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Wow i love how you express yourself...thx for letting us in your world, i hope things get better for you pllz rite more! ! ! DLG

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Hari Khabrani 29 April 2009

Black absorbs sun light while dark never sees sun. Distant met in poem and gloomed. Thanks. Readable. Good write.

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Daryl Young 23 March 2009

Very dark, but loving. An interesting look at a sad lonely girl, and her fate. Lovely wording. Thank you Please feel free to read and comment on my works. Rabbit

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