Get To Near Poem by gabby chamberland

Get To Near

Rating: 5.0


Breathing hot breath
on to the frost of cold glass
trying to get a peek at last
of whats hidden behind the mask

when the glass is cleared
what is found is not feared
a stronger bond takes hold
and the book is to unfold

but inside there is fear
inside is not a cheer
inside there is pain
inside there are no joyful games

crystal blue marbles
turn to ice
when the explorer try's to make nice
their soul will pay the price

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 15 August 2009

and the make up washed away.. the sun came out to play...above.. and below the hands busy indeed.. full of need in glass that sees.. where you go..iip

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Claire Hunter 21 August 2009

Very Nice. I loved the way it unfolds.

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rago rago 16 August 2009

well crafted poem.................

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Yll L 16 August 2009

nice poem...im not in a sound mind to comment on your poem coz i got so many to prioritize but even if in that way...i encouraged u to write a lot...heheheh''''' as if im an expert...

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

Finely tuned verse with the bonus of great imagery....You have a wonderful way with expression...which I look for a=in all poets.....keep up the excellent work my friend 10

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Eyan Desir 16 August 2009

Goood write........................10s

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