From Experience And Thereafter.......... Poem by sonia roy

From Experience And Thereafter..........



Now that the two worlds
are separated
The smaller world
is in the eternal wait-
To receive a Call
from the bigger world.
The microcosm is eager
to once again-
Re-enter the world
of affection.
But the macrocosm is
yet to give a Call.
Is it a sin to form
a separate world of its own?
Is it a crime in
wanting to once again re-enter-
into the womb of the
ever protecting bigger world?
Will these two worlds ever meet!
The smaller world is-
grovelling in the dust,
bleeding profusely.
As it is unaware of
its self-protection.
Is the Call of the
greater world deferred
Cause of unawreness or indifference?
What will happen if the
newer world is not able to
find its home once again?
Will it be left to die
in the dust bleeding forever?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 06 February 2007

Sonia, you do have the power of expression and you do well. I suggest you also give importance to the 'visual' treat of poetry - you would do lot better if you could work a little bit more on the visual construction. That shall attract loads of hits from other PH members on your pages. Your selection of the theme and then going about the narration is truly engrossing.

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Kee Thampi 10 January 2007

I really thankful (we readers) for this great poem worries on Big brothers of World ad their crimes... it a crime in wanting to once again re-enter- into the womb of the ever protecting bigger world? Will these two worlds ever meet! The smaller world is- grovelling The real flutter the World with this cries....Sonia we with you...

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