Friends Or More Poem by Brianna Trombley

Friends Or More

Rating: 5.0


I can still remember
The day when I clicked
Friends for so long
My heart and mind tricked

But then that day
I saw you in a new light
Feelings of desire
Grasping me tight

That was it for me
I knew I was done
My falling for you
Had already begun

I am constantly wondering
If somehow you feel the same
I’ve left my heart on the table
Its all yours to claim

I don’t know how to tell you
The way that I feel
I can’t picture your reaction
This is all too unreal

For the last few months
I’ve been pondering this question
I know our love is not allowed
The way I feel held in retention

But if by some miracle
You feel this way too
I’d say to hell with what they think
Forget them, as our love we pursue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reihaneh Jalalian 19 January 2009

it was fantastic i loved it so much. beautiful. well done 10

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Wow this is amazing, Im going through this exact thing at the moment in my life and it touched something very real inside of me.10+++

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Libbie Jones 17 January 2009

I totally know what you were going through in this poem. I was so in your position, then i gave up and decided to live my life. I'm actually quite happier now. I loved the poem. I absolutely did. Thanks=)

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Kesav Easwaran 11 January 2009

'I knew I was done My falling for you Had already begun'... romantic sincere magnetic expression, Brianna...any body will fall for this kind of love no doubt...beautiful write...10

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Kimber Harrison 11 January 2009

I love it! I really really love it! It's so.....I don't know....inspirational I guess. This is how we should act, just lay ourselves on the table and forget what others think.

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