Friends In The Sky Poem by Vidyadhar ....

Friends In The Sky

Rating: 4.6


On the first sunlight I arose,
To see a bunch of rose;
Through my bed room door,
It is my birthday I remember;

Sun shining brightly in the sky;
Reminding me of my,
Good days I passed by;
They had promised to come by,
Whenever going went hay wire;

Waiting for them day by day,
Sun came and went by,
Moon waited for me in the sky;
Along with Stars to smile,
On me whenever I was shy;

I start the day with a smile to spare,
To my lovely friends in the sky,
Who shall be with me whenever I cry;
Who shall be with me whenever I cry;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracker Ogryphon 25 February 2008

A touching poem. What you may want to do is to slowely think of what yu want to say and make your readers to like it. 'Writing Poetry Is Like Painting With Words', 'Robert Louis Stevenson' Thanks Tracker

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Melvina Germain 29 February 2008

Your poem is lovely Vidyadhar, I look forward to reading more. Melvina

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2008

This poem is rhyming well

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Walterrean Salley 17 September 2014

It's good to have good friends. I admit that I couldn't make it without my - very wonderful and priceless- family and friends who are so faithful to me. Thank you.

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Blue angel Florida 06 March 2008

Friends in the Sky, Friends to keep you dry, friends in thoughts... friendly :)

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Loved this peom! It reached deep in my heart thanks

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Nema Shama 04 March 2008

you have concentrated more on rhyming.good one

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Suvikar Saliyan 03 March 2008

good freinds.............in the sky

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