Friend's Memory Poem by dimitrios galanis

Friend's Memory

Rating: 5.0


Since our puberty and always the two of us together
often in midsummer's time we used to take the downhill,
as soon as possible to reach
its grace's dew.
The stones dragged by the eagerly pace
could not follow our hasty descend.
In our first view - from above - it seemed
cyangreen huge reptil
to skim its whiteness
down there where it was creeping,
the far deep gorge to cross.
Elsewhere with momentum, unrestrained beast,
there and there tamed monster, in nonchalance.

Ιn our hands -the first years- primitive fisherman's paraphernalia,
technology's modern equipment, tools, baits - later on.
The battle was given from the riverside, the rocks amid,
traversing not dangerous passes,
hand in hand daring the uncertain ones.
A real struggle to bring the trout to the rocky or sandy bank.
We had the midday's break for a garlic, tomato, cheese
by the Bridge, at Valea, at the Cataract by the Mill
and then again rushed to our joy's sport.

Its stories caused laughing much to the gatherings.
You had the gift to see casualties and successes
from their hilarious point of view.
A failure, clumsiness, mishap was painted with jocundity's nuance.
Your kindness wanted to spread the joy, the laugh.

Such memories forged
our strong friendly relatioship,
and as long as I remain alone with them in life,
I will be regretting our river for not having the need of anyone
to creep immortal itself, beast lone,
in the bed οf its eternity without sensitive heart's contacts.

From now on, everytime I will see it,
for this only, my friend, exactly the reason
I will gloat:
What's the award to creep in its bed in eternity?
The graces of our mortal memories it will never taste.
.......
* [ To the memory of my friend George Giotakis ]

Friend's Memory
Saturday, February 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvaonyema Uba 11 February 2017

To skim its whiteness... Well expressed! Sylva

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 January 2018

A remarkable poem in form of epistle, and a great dedication celebrating friendship.

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dimitrios galanis 24 January 2018

In the picture my village and down the river Arachthos were we used to go on foot so often in summertime.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2017

Great write. Rich in description. The memories never leave us. You have paid a beautiful tribute to your friend here. A day in the midst of nature with a dear friend is a treasure one keeps to the depths of heart always. A perfect 10.

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Dimitrios Galanis 08 March 2017

Thanks, dear Nosheen.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

Beautiful memories presented here of you and your friend, may be rest in peace. Thanks for sharing.

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Dimitrios Galanis 25 February 2017

Thank you dear Pamela.

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Barry Middleton 11 February 2017

Very nice - memories and a beautiful place deserves poetry.

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Souren Mondal 11 February 2017

While I might be too young to fully relate to your poem, dear Dimitrios, I certainly can appreciate the beauty of this elegy. I remember spending time with my grandfather whom I lost in 2013. He and I spend a lot of time in the fields as he was a farmer. Now every time I see fields, I remember those earlier days, holding his hands and walking in the lands full of trees. Those fields remained but my granpa passed away. And indeed, the world will live on, but it would never have the SAME promenades of granpa and me. Beautiful poem dear. My heart goes out to you on your loss.

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Dimitrios Galanis 11 February 2017

Τhank you my dear Souren.Keep close ties with relatives, friends. For people you meet every day have a kind smile. Feelings of a kind heart make the world we live in a paradise, nothing else.

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